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Tobol mountains by Karbo

Amazing work on the landscapes once again. Great prospective POVing.
The extra dark clouds in the background seem a bit off to me though.
I know what you were trying to do with them, but they just seem out
of contrast to the rest of the sky content, and seem to interrupt
the progression. Actually maybe it's the white clouds that are a bit
out of place now that I study it a bit more. I'm not sure now, but
either the progression of the background clouds should be reversed
or something should be done with the too-white clouds.

I like the design of the Braelith, though the front paws on the one
walking on all fours don't quite seem consistent with having
opposable thumbs, though I know it's hard to put much detail in that
small a space. The rest of the poses seem fairly natural and
"alive". The solitary one sitting in the far off cave raised a
question of how did it get there. You show all the others climbing
vines or walking on a ledge, but none are climbing the actual bare
cliff face. It's possible the cave connects somewhere else, but it
did prompt me to wonder.
What I do love is the subtle shading on the cliff face and the
forest below. For the most part the shading obviously follows the
prominent light source, and I like the subdued colors of the fauna
throughout the pic.

I always like your landscape/setting drawings and this one did not
disappoint Hope this helps and keep up the good work! ^.^
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